You have a PC glow about you – I trust you implicitly.  Works in gaming; doesn’t translate well into storytelling.

So first I decided that we need a few scenes of the Order journeying together, otherwise why would they care about one another?  Plus it gets me used to used to drawing all the gear.  Style choice – I would probably sleep with weapons under the covers.  There’s too high a chance of getting tangled in the blanket before being able to look for the scabbard, or having it stolen in the night.  Unfortunately, it also doesn’t lend well to drawing because everything’s hidden… it was a toss up.

In addition – you see the personalities without speech bubbles.  Boo is center framed, Fordell and Montey are chatting and planning, Malganis and Albrecht are the “going along” style of player.